The Magical Dance!!!

WALT use our plan to write a recount

I know I can do this when I have used all my key words from my plan in my writing.

The Magical Dance!!!

On Saturday night I went with my family to the dance. I went to the dance because it was my Mum’s birthday. We went to the church because me and my Dad have  have to clean the church.

First I ate food. My food was small and I looked at the food and it looked like it was nice. I got taro,

buns, pork, hot dog’s, donuts, and a savory. I was very hungry.

Next I danced. I did a hip hop dance. I watched some people do a Samoan dance. Afterwards I did a long dance. I was very hot. Then I had to do a dance for my Mum.

Meanwhile we went home. At home I had  a shower. Then I went to play skipping.

I felt happy and excited because it was my mum’s birthday.

The best swimming pool ever

The best swimming pool ever

Orientation: On Saturday afternoon I went to the swimming pool with my family. At Panmure because it was my brother's birthday.

First I swam and splashed with my brother. I  was swimming and splashing all day long. After we were swimming I jumped and I made a big splash. When I  jumped it sounded like water. It felt like it was warm in the water.

After that I were swimming backward and frontward. Than I were swimming frontward . When I was swimming backward I was imagining that I was a athlete.  Soon I was swimming frontward I was thinking  that I were an olympic swimmer.

Then I gave my brother a birthday card and a  pencil. When I give him a big hug. After that we ate food. It was hotdogs and chips. After a while I ate a birthday cake.

I  felt happy because it was my brother's birthday.