Have you ever had a party at the swimming pools before?

It was a cool, sunny day on Saturday the 27th of June, so my family and I went to the swimming pools in Panmure because it was my mum's birthday.

When we got there we changed into our togs quickly like a rocket. Then we ran to the pools as fast as we can because it was filled with lots of people. Then we played some games with balls. First we passed the ball to each other. When we were passing the ball, my cousin Danny threw the ball at me and it hit my face. It hit me so hard that I almost cried.

After a while, I felt better so I went to line up for the water slide. There was a long queue so it took me a long time to get to the top. When it was my turn, I felt a little bit scared because it was my first time.

When the light turned green, I went down the slide very fast.

After that, I was feeling hungry, but before we ate, we sang the happy birthday song to my mum. Then we ate some food, we had ice cream, hot hot dogs, chips, cake and some cold drinks. Then the food was very delicious and yummy. Before long, we had a nice, cold shower. Then we had a lovely drive home.

Maybe my family and I could go and play at a place that have different slides.

We are learning to understand and use descriptive language in my writing.

I know I can do this when I use appropriate adjectives and verbs to describe.